Part one of four bookmarks based off the four elements: Water, Earth, Fire and Air. As you may know I give each of my characters a dominant element, in this case, Benjamin, Lin and Mayra are water types. They are generally calm personalities, but they are not by any means 'shallow'. In the Dutch language there is a saying: "Quiet waters have deep bottoms", which applies to them very well. They are adaptive and will always find a way to get what they need: like water flowing towards the sea. Lin is blind, but adapted very well. Ben is an outcast but has found a way to enjoy himself even more than before. And Mayra has always been a mysterious character, like the smooth surface of a lake at night, lit only by the light of the stars. Beautiful, but potentially dangerous.
After these ramblings some practical info: Drawn on Smooth Bristol paper with China ink, coloured with Copic markers with some details done in Prismacolor pencils. For some reason the scan looks so much harsher and messy than the original, I'm not sure which settings I need to change to get rid of that effect. Sorry for the watermark, but I am very proud of this and don't want it stolen :/ I drew this back in the summer months, but never got around to scanning it. Anyways, enjoy!
It's always a major plus to have the contures of the key elements overlapping and meeting other lines in a composition- it will bind it all together as a whole. You have managed to tie Lin's curved body line to the frame- was that intentional? It often happens unintentionally. There are other lines here that helps to create this effect as well. Good job!
Thank you very much! Um, I think composition-wise this one is best, though not all of the lines were that intentional I think. I did want a 'flowing' composition because of the represented element - no straight lines but rounded curves, like flowing water. Lin's line was intentional though
I do that most of the time (guided by feeling), and there's nothing wrong with that. But mom keeps noticing composition lines in my pictures, so I thought I'd forward the tip.
Not that it has to be present in every piece, and it can be difficult to pull off. But it looks really good on a bookmark, and this is a fine example.
I do that most of the time (guided by feeling), and there's nothing wrong with that. But mom keeps noticing composition lines in my pictures, so I thought I'd forward the tip.